Sometimes

another 2008 one

Sometimes I don't know what to give
Oh I wish I knew
Sometimes people just take
and don't give back
Sometimes I feel so empty
So alone
Sometimes I wish I could
tell them how i feel
Oh how I would like to speak
But i can't
Where is my voice?
What am i to give?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem with some good question. Hard to know what to give and take in life. I like the flow of thoughts and the good questions at the end of the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Mr. ECHO]

very nice.

[augustmoon80]

Wonderful, I can totally relate to this!

[EMF]

Write more.

I want to read more.

It's damn good