Sometimes

Sometimes

A Poem by Sarah Hobbit
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Sometimes I don't know what to give
Oh I wish I knew
Sometimes people just take
and don't give back
Sometimes I feel so empty
So alone
Sometimes I wish I could
tell them how i feel
Oh how I would like to speak
But i can't
Where is my voice?
What am i to give?

© 2019 Sarah Hobbit


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A powerful poem with some good question. Hard to know what to give and take in life. I like the flow of thoughts and the good questions at the end of the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago
very nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago
Wonderful, I can totally relate to this!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Write more.

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It's damn good

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 Added on May 9, 2011
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Sarah Hobbit
Sarah Hobbit

Shire, New Zealand



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Hi i'm Sarah. I am just living the mundane life. I really like art, poetry, acting, Shakespeare, J.R.R. Tolkien, and old books. Some of my fav poets are as follows: Elizabeth Barrett Browning, John.. more..

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