Setting Rain

Rain outside my window

 

Pitter Patter Splatter

on the tree with golden leaf

 

Shiny little drip drops sit

sparkling in the light of end of day

 

Sounds of bird singing

their evening good byes

 

As the night comes with rainy darkness

Author's Note

16/4/11

Reviews

[Elaenor Aisling]

Love the image and sound words! Good job! :)

[EMF]

I like this poems rhythym as much as its contents. It perefectly matches the slow onset of rain. Another cracker.

[CriCry]

I like this poem. Rain has always fascinated me.
Keep on writing these wonderful poems.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love this poem, capturing for me anyway when I'm lying in bed and can hear the sounds so perfectly.

Great write:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the sound of a slow and easy rain. Sort of a meditation it can create. I like the poem. Your words create a good and peaceful place to be. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote