Feeling lonely

I wrote this when i was younger.

Once i was alone in my room.
No one to speak to.
It was quiet.

No one came up to play with me.
My sister was playing with her friends.
My mum was talking to her next door neighbour.

My room was quite dark because it was raining outside.
It was Saturday. Every Saturday mostly it would rain.
Loneliness is a thing where everything is silent.
You just taking your own breaths.

On your own, you are thinking i am all alone.
Just you taking your own breaths.
No one shouting or interrupting.
I was still in my room.

Until my sister came and said would you like to play with me?
I said i would be delighted to.
I still like to be alone sometimes but,
i'd rather not be lonely.

Reviews

[ImSJ]

Sarah, I don't know whether you intended it to be uplifting but so I found it. Maybe it is just a little story and if that is it, it did work on that level, too.
Your use of capitalized and lower case "I" is a bit distracting. Should we read anything into it?