meet me in the street

not finished yet!

meet me in the street.

cambridge way or rivoli drive.

coalesce out of the night.

let this dumb city sleep.

let's tumble.

let's dance.

let's fall.

let's laugh.

just meet me in the street.

meet me in the street.

let's watch flies die in the lights.

but we know we are flies ourselves,

risking life to know desire.

let's get out of here.

let's walk - is there any need to drive?

step by step, onward, forward,

disintegrate into the night.

let's be shadows - or at least watch ours

stretch and embrace in the light.

step by step, onward, forward,

just meet me in the street.

Reviews

[Su' Nacnetaf]

Entertaining, simple and somewhat sweet poem of yours, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, it has a certain feeling of inocence to it which I liked. Wonderfully written, great poem.

[SPINNING ON that dizzy ..]

I love the bounce to this! haha I was smiling and tapping my feet.... think you could call it predance.... haha Liking this alot. Can see you dancing with a fedora on and a scarf that flies as you move..... like this alot.... might be finished already.... can't think of ANY way to improve it