Party

Party

A Poem by sasha

Don't leave stay here don’t go please don’t go

Let me enjoy the wind playing a melody of your songs

One more time but let me really hear the music in it

Let me enjoy a wine of joy  I can have a nice little drink

I just wanted you to enjoy the party of our lives

I'm just trying to enjoy the best party ever 

Let's enjoy the Country Bear jamboree  

I couldn’t wait to go out and take in the view

Stay and share your wishes with me tell me

Something about home that I do not know

With elves & dwarfs  don’t go please don’t go

I'm just trying to enjoy the best party ever 

That is the way the teddy bears have their picnic

What if it is our last free night in that forest

Let me take a look & admire the view

Slowly & gently there you go nice and easy I dream

When we get naked I will smell that fine fragrance

Let me enjoy a wine of love I can have a nice little drink

Look it's just that I haven't enjoyed this taste for so long

Stay and share your wishes with me tell me

Just sit back lie down and enjoy the show for you

Slow things down make sure you can soak in this special moment

Oh dear you are just like a teddy I could get lost in your eyes

There you go nice and easy not so fast wait a moment

I enjoy the best party ever & a glorious day of my life

When the fresh white lotuses you sent illuminated my room

And  began to talk  to me

© 2013 sasha


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imperative forms of a verb (go, look) I used to express whether the action or state, they denote some other manner as command or wish, looks like a bit awkward..but I like this poem, thank you, Jacob, for your nice words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


sounds like a good party to atend..the view is spectacular...

and romance in the air...but it never lasts long enough.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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sasha

Munich, city centre, Germany



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