Behind The World's Bars

Behind The World's Bars

A Poem by Sasha
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A Poem based on the restrictions a person with a few differences faces due to society.

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I feel like a prisoner,

Stuck inside a jail.

Just rotting away.

Awaiting bail.

 

I can’t get out because of the way, society will look at me.

Even though I’m past caring in what they see.

 

I’m stuck here because of the people I’m associated with.

Will suffer if I’m free.

And will go through a lot of s**t.

 

I’m going to die around these blunt black walls.

Suck forever within.

Still Behind These Bars.

Suffering because of some unknown sin.

 

Life is my prison.

The world my jail.

Death may be my freedom.

Since there is no help to which I can avail.

© 2010 Sasha


Author's Note

Sasha
The rhyme scheme's mixed up. It was intentional.

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Dom
Wow, that was really good! I like how you mixed up the rhyme scheme. It makes you unique and different from other writers. The 1st 4 lines are def. my favorite. I'm sure a lot of ppl feel like prisoners in todays society since a lot pf people are afraid of seeing something different. Great good. :)

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Life is my prison.
The world my jail.
Death may be my freedom.
Since there is no help to which I can avail.

I loved these words here, there is truth in this.
I like this and enjoyed this write.
You write very well, you are talented.


Posted 10 Years Ago


I really like this, I can totally relate to the poem. I suffer from depression so I feel like I'm always locked up inside myself. Great write. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


realy good and well realy kind of well i dont know true but a sad truth i dont realy know how to discribe the way i felt reading this a great read

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is sad.You should read Steppenwolf it will crystalize those thoughts of yours.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Dom
Wow, that was really good! I like how you mixed up the rhyme scheme. It makes you unique and different from other writers. The 1st 4 lines are def. my favorite. I'm sure a lot of ppl feel like prisoners in todays society since a lot pf people are afraid of seeing something different. Great good. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very good poem! i like how you mixed up the rhyme scheme. very powerful

Posted 11 Years Ago


A excellent poem. Disappointment in every line. Hunger to escape is the feel of the poem. Description and story is outstanding. Death is not the freedom. Education and willingness to work hard. Thank you for the powerful poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on January 6, 2010
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Sasha
Sasha

Gurgaon, Agnostic, India



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We just go on and on. living, dying and living again. Its what we do in those few blips of our existence in this universe that matters. Gandhi said, everything we do in our life will be insignificant.. more..

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