A remarkable Emotion

A remarkable Emotion

A Poem by MechanicalFaeire

Love is ever lasting
Once you feel it, it never goes
But though the feeling remains the one its anchored n may go
As people we must realize this
And know that heartbreak is inevitable
But the loss of a friend is different
That love is love we trust 
Love we can rely on without any doubt
As your best friend walks away from you and leaves behind the love you shared
Your heart will break
But unlike other love
It very well may never mend
Love is the most dangerous emotion
And the slowest form of Suicide
But even though I know that
I will always yearn for more
I will always look for souls to connect with
Secrets to share
Hugs to heal on and memories that will one day hurt me more than anything
Humans really are interesting

© 2011 MechanicalFaeire


Author's Note

MechanicalFaeire
not at all my best piece I know. Dont critisize. Just something i was thinking on. Just sort of wrote what was in my head at the moment. Tell me what you think

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An interesting look into the human condition. Humans are my favorite creatures, for they are so soft and vulnerabile, but they completely dominate this planet. This poem speaks very true to that, with a good flow and nice little story. Very graceful, sweetheart. The grace and the pitfalls of human life, you captured them well. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice write!! A true poem

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Canton, OH



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