Away

Away

A Poem by SavyNess

To a place far
minus the people and multiply the places;
take me away
Pretending this all disappeared
before we become everything we feared
I was on my path 
and along you came and stole me away
It's pretty much simple math,
six of one, half of a dozen of another
you would always say
We'll lose out if we wait
and lose even more if we do not
Not just a little, I mean we lose
a whole lot
After the commotion, I just want to take you and 
run away

© 2016 SavyNess


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You took us to this alternate world, because someone took YOU there. If I have the interpretation somewhere close. I would have to say it doesn't matter to you if you remain there or you leave there. However, wherever the place is you decide, the person that showed you the way will follow. Nice work!

Posted 3 Years Ago


You have a very cool style of writing. Enjoyed this very much.

Posted 4 Years Ago


love, adventure ! Journey ! Take me away !

Posted 5 Years Ago



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SavyNess
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