++sleeper++
A Poem by
ScaryTrees
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as the sun diminishes into the west permafrost mantles the shrinking land i seek ebon deepness never known burrowing ever down that i may find a bed of cold marl and damp stone i will lay in abeyance there until memories pass of the world of men till eons uncounted at last unfurl seas once risen again subside and then something beautiful might rise anon into the light from this dark chrysalis
© 2011 ScaryTrees
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Beautiful use of language! It kind of has that William Shatner feeling to it, as you go to the next line. My only problem is that this poem is too advanced for my own reading level, but I know in my heart that you wrote this the way you intended.
Great job!
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Beautifully done. I love the line, "memory fades of the works of men, till eons uncounted at last unfurl
Posted 12 Years Ago
Beautifully done. I love the line, "memory fades of the works of men, till eons uncounted at last unfurl
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Classic dark. In my head, I could hear Vincent Price reading this aloud.....I can't think of a higher compliment than that. Good stuff!
Cheers!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Classic dark. In my head, I could hear Vincent Price reading this aloud.....I can't think of a higher compliment than that. Good stuff!
Cheers!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Beautiful use of language! It kind of has that William Shatner feeling to it, as you go to the next line. My only problem is that this poem is too advanced for my own reading level, but I know in my heart that you wrote this the way you intended.
Great job!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Beautiful use of language! It kind of has that William Shatner feeling to it, as you go to the next line. My only problem is that this poem is too advanced for my own reading level, but I know in my heart that you wrote this the way you intended.
Great job!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I am probably going to repeat the sentiment of the crowd, but great word use and flow. Very vivid and dark.
Matthew
Posted 12 Years Ago
I am probably going to repeat the sentiment of the crowd, but great word use and flow. Very vivid and dark.
Matthew
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
What a depth to your work... it drifts us over the eons of time.. the vastness of space.. yet is so personal.. so powerful. It is a song of life...
Posted 12 Years Ago
What a depth to your work... it drifts us over the eons of time.. the vastness of space.. yet is so personal.. so powerful. It is a song of life...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Unique and outstanding imagery love..you are a dab hand at metaphorical brilliance!
Light to be reborn from such depths..not taken lightly but possible!
Wonderful work
xx
Posted 12 Years Ago
Unique and outstanding imagery love..you are a dab hand at metaphorical brilliance!
Light to be reborn from such depths..not taken lightly but possible!
Wonderful work
xx
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
dream like metamorphic prailine mantle parable~ within without the cycles shift~ graceful imagery with diamond tipped descriptives~
Posted 12 Years Ago
dream like metamorphic prailine mantle parable~ within without the cycles shift~ graceful imagery with diamond tipped descriptives~
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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