It Amazes Me

One of my very few epic sounding love songs

It amazes me how you weave your web so

I can read how deeply it goes.

They eyes of the world cry all over our things....

It amazes me, how souls reunited must sing.

 

It amazes me... The pranks we pull off.

Flying blind and clear-off our rockers!

Yet, inside we know what makes it all happen,

it amazes me... the magic we're tapping into.

 

It amazes me the things people say

When they don't understand the nature of the pain.

We try and we try and we can't figure out

Why so few of them see what all the excitement's about.

 

So take my hand, take my words, make a song.

It's no fairy-tale, we must build the thing stronger...

Each moment of life, we're together, alone.

It amazes me how you'll always wind up in my arms.

 

Reviews

[xlynne]

i really like this! it would make a great song! soem of the lines don't really rhyme but maybe thats what you were going for. personally i don't like when you referred to it all as a game, i don't really see it that way so the word game kind of threw it all out of rhythm for me. and i think you should change the new in in every new life to aspect or minute or something along those lines. just my personal opinions though. still its a great song!

[L.M. Spurrell]

Thanks, LJ!

I made some changes to the lyrics... and the tune flows better than ever!

May be recording this one soon.