Man's Law

Man's Law

God has ten,

man had hundreds.

How would I abide the law,

If I kept on breaking God's bow?

Reviews

[SimonitroX]

You know, there's something I question about a thing called human rights is that what makes another human being special to give human rights, eh?

I mean, humans need some laws and orders so they could behave because in our nature, we like to defy. At first, it's fear but then once, we overcome it, we start believing that we're kings and queens of the universe. However, not all of us are like that but a big chunk of us are like that. Silly humans!

Indeed, we always break God's rules but we're afraid to break ours. The only thing that is different. God will forgive but Mr. Ego Human will not... you're going to jail or get killed.

Interesting poem. ;)

[Lane-roe]

How true! It's such a confusing world we live in. I really like the fact that there's only one stanza-its simplicity leaves an almost riddle-like quality to it-nice work :)

[Scyrus123]

It really does make me wonder.

[PyroKitty24]

It makes you wonder, doesn't it? Everyone has their own rules, and it's hard to follow everything.

[Scyrus123]

thank you :)...

[Scyrus123]

I was thinking for hours on what to write on our poem contest with only 1 stanza. This is the outcome

[Scyrus123]

:))