Art

Dedicated for all the people that appreciate art.

Here is a little part

Of this thing called art

When all of us create

In a poetic sense

Pardon me if i always do rhyme

Took me more time

Words are there to gather

And stack it as a design

Art is life should appreciate

Because of its Beauty contemplate

Art is something that we should do

Creations of one's creation roots.

Life is art itself 

It has death and destruction

It interrelates with all of our nature

Became one's nature of man.

Life is something we should offer

Into one and another

Because life is an art

And art is creations of ones thoughts.

Reviews

[seath]

i think you could make your writing more smooth flowing for its meaning and rhythm by employing more sound devices in your form,, you may add also internal rhymes

[Zachary Cyrick Addams Nash]

Thanks for reviewing this. I'll take up your advice.:D

[anonyMEty.celeste]

It seemed a little cyclic -not sure if you meant for it to be that way (pretty cool though, if you did). Might want to be a little more mindful about the point of your rhyming/ the point of your writing.

Liked that each stanza's beginning made a point that I could pick out and later make judgement about after I'd read the entire thing. Good read.

[Zachary Cyrick Addams Nash]

Yes. The thing with writing a poem with a rhyme is quite hard. Sometime it has to be synonymous without sticking to its point.