Art

Art

A Poem by Zachary Cyrick Addams Nash
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Dedicated for all the people that appreciate art.

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Here is a little part
Of this thing called art
When all of us create
In a poetic sense

Pardon me if i always do rhyme
Took me more time
Words are there to gather
And stack it as a design

Art is life should appreciate
Because of its Beauty contemplate
Art is something that we should do
Creations of one's creation roots.

Life is art itself 
It has death and destruction
It interrelates with all of our nature
Became one's nature of man.

Life is something we should offer
Into one and another
Because life is an art
And art is creations of ones thoughts.

© 2013 Zachary Cyrick Addams Nash


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i think you could make your writing more smooth flowing for its meaning and rhythm by employing more sound devices in your form,, you may add also internal rhymes

Posted 8 Years Ago


Zachary Cyrick Addams Nash

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing this. I'll take up your advice.:D
It seemed a little cyclic -not sure if you meant for it to be that way (pretty cool though, if you did). Might want to be a little more mindful about the point of your rhyming/ the point of your writing.

Liked that each stanza's beginning made a point that I could pick out and later make judgement about after I'd read the entire thing. Good read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Zachary Cyrick Addams Nash

8 Years Ago

Yes. The thing with writing a poem with a rhyme is quite hard. Sometime it has to be synonymous with.. read more

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