DUNGEON

Seanne, let yesterday
be locked in the dungeon part
of your mind. Move on!

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Interesting write... "the dungeon part of your mind" I love that.

[CHRIS ANDES]

;p

[Steph]

I think a lot of us need to take this into mind. About leaving behind the past and not dwelling on it. Awesome job.

[Meghan]

I found this very inspiring. Sometimes we need to remind ourselves that what's happened is done and we need to forget it, rather then hold onto the negativity. Very simple and short, but powerful nonetheless. Well done.

[Katelyn]

Short and to the point. I agree with Amata Luna to not dwell in the past and I agree one must let go to move on but also remember and learn from past experiences. Great Poem! (:

[Amata Luna]

Yeah right. I agree about not dwelling too much in the past. To live a happy life, then one must learn how to let go.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

MOve on indeed, well done.

[jennifer little]

great poem wonderful job ... keep up the good work .... thanks for the share

[AK]

Good advise! I liked the fact that you're giving advise to yourself, lol. When I read the title I thought it was going to be a loong poem on how it is to be in a dungeon and the poem is actually a personification of dark times in life and all those usual stuff.. Thanks for writing something out of the ordinary!

[Coyote Poetry]

Wise advice given in this poem. We must move on and try to some good in a life. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote