Perfect Hallucination

Nothing about her is wrong, really such a marvelous creation

Not one error was made on her, she's the perfect hallucination

Everytime I turn my head, I see her right before my eyes

She smiles and holds out her hands, that's where my heart lies

I reach to touch her skin, and quickly she dissolves

Not even realizing the amount of emotion, this involves

My mind's losing control, it's believing she'll actually stay

Then the heart stops beating, once again she flashed away

Her voice never leaves my head, a masterpiece describes the sound

Hearing her call out my name, she's the fox and I'm the hound

She stays sassy and sexy, her sweet scent fills up my nose

I can't focus on anything, how loud my heart pounding grows

Only she knows how to steal my love, time and time again

She vanishes at the worst moments, yet to hate her would be a sin

The anxiety to see her again, is full and ample

Spent less than three seconds with her, only a sample

Desperate to taste her lips, and stroke her hair

She looks so real, but she's fake, this is so unfair

Her physical beauty is just so exemplary and dreamy

She beguils me, wondering what she thinks when she sees me 

I wait impassively for her to randomly appear again

I titillate at the thought of what I might see her in

One day I'll claim her, a ghost I must make mine

The perfect hallucination, with a love so devine

Reviews

[hardik]

You really love her, dont you? If only she could read this poem, it'd bring her back to life. Being in love is a feeling so great and writing poems for her is even better. Greatly written. :-)

[Steven]

Thank you very much for the heartening compliment. In the story I do, but in reality, there is no 'her'..So if she could be brought to life, that would be amazing. :-)

[vspjaguar]

A void is created in us when we don't get a proper dosage of love.When this happens our imagination creates someone perfect and someone almost real.You've given us an in-depth narration of such a creation.
Very fascinating.Might I add that I have written some poems very similar to yours.The feel is the same only the description is different.I'll share them soon.Read them and let me know what you think.

[Steven]

Yes you are speaking of truth there jaguar, we do tend to let our imagination create a beautiful piece of art. Thank you for the compliment, and I will be sure to return the favor.

[vspjaguar]

my poem bewitched in my dream is similar to this, you have read it too! :)

[gr8 scott]

Sometimes you read things, you wish you never read. I commend your writing, this is just brilliant. So brilliant, it pains me to read. Because her name is Jenna, and she can never be mine. Thank you. This was, just gr8.

[Steven]

Thanks a million for the compliment g8 Scott, I think there are a lot of us who have that 'someone' who has that kind of affect on us. It can be bittersweet at the very least. Thanks for reading.