Yaadein

A shortest description of old memories with changing world!!

Un aankho me to aaj bhi jannat dikhti h...

mann chahta h fir se uthaye kalm...

aur bayaaaaañ kree tumhare sath betaaye huae pal..

fir sochta hu rhne do...
rhnee du abb...
samay badl gya...

kuch hum badl gye...kuch tum badl gye...

iss daurte vakht me kaafi nagme badl gye !!

Author's Note

Thankyou for your time !!
And I wish you guys to please give me some suggestions so that I can improve this skill !!

Reviews

[Sonakshi Arora]

Aaahh , so beautifully written! Hindi poetry never gets old ;)

[Ayush Mishra]

Thanks Sonakshi :)

[Sonakshi Arora]

My pleasure!

[Najam Us Saher]

Waah... loved the ending.....beautifully written.

[Ayush Mishra]

yes...exactly a true ending....

[Surya]

Haan, after days I found a good piece, Thank you for that...and i enjoyed your write, go on with your works as you are, you will improve by day, nothing is best rite....:)

[Ayush Mishra]

Thanks for your pleasing words .... Surya...

[APOORVA]

behtareen, kya bat hai :)
ab sochta hu rehne do, samay badal gaya :)

[Ayush Mishra]

hahaha.....kuch hum badl gye...dats why!!

[APOORVA]

koi badalna nahi chahta, halaat badal dete hain although :)

[Ayush Mishra]

omg...daurte vakht me kaafi nagme badl gye...so written there!!

[APOORVA]

bilkul but,
mausam ki tarah yun badal jana acha nahi lagta
waqt ki tarah yun guzar jana acha nahi lagta

[Ayush Mishra]

gujartee waqt naye nagme layenge...
hrrr mausum me naye phool khilayenge..
be positive :)

[Abhishek Asthana]

Very nice creation... next time should try to describe in brief

[Ayush Mishra]

Hahaha...I will definetly try !!