Minds

In the back of every mind. There are things even we cannot see. I don't want to fall asleep knowing that there is a world out there I shouldn't know about. An adventure waiting to happen, and a life waiting to be lived. Something new around every corner. It isn't a matter of who is better, it's a matter of who you are and if you want to work to get to it. So many in this world in the back of their mind, are giving up, and it is a sad thought. They shouldn't give up the little hope they have inside. No matter the age, the gender, the sexual orientation. We are creatures of the planet earth and our lives mean more to ourselves then anything. Sacrifice, living for each other, having something to believe in no matter what it is. Ourselves can be our greatest enemy, but it can also be our greatest friend. Even if you aren't human, we all live here, we all die here, we all have things we wish to do here. In the back of every mind, even we cannot predict the upcoming future.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Astro]

"Ourselves can be our greatest enemy, but it can also be our greatest friend." This sentence is poorly written, could be cleaned up perhaps, like this, "We ourselves, can be our greatest enemy or, best of friends." You wrote 'then' instead of 'than' again in this sentence, keep working on this in the future, I know I've mentioned this before. Here is the sentence with the error, "We are creatures of the planet earth and our lives mean more to ourselves then anything." Overall, it is an interesting monologue.

[Ravyne Hawke]

Well written philosophical piece. I'd really like to see what your plans are for this. Makea an excellent introduction to a story.

[Barbara Walker]

So true! If we can all respect each others right to be, and encouraged each other, what a better place this would be.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I surging philosopher I see, nice how your articulate your views and share


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