Nameless Problem

Nameless Problem

A Poem by Rivaxorus
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Sometimes, frustration makes the hardest things difficult.

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You call something odd
Something fun
Something strange
But to all its worth
Something comes wrong

They were told it
They were hidden it
Frustration, with all it is
Not our problem
Why is it here

These words are empty
Seemingly jumbled
Maybe the best of emotions
Are written out
If not physical

Go away
Honestly its annoying
It makes things worse
Just go away
And everything would be fine

Leave, you weren't supposed to be here
This was our night not yours
And the baggage is only more rude
So, please

Just go die. 

© 2014 Rivaxorus


Author's Note

Rivaxorus
Yeah, some fucktard decided to ruin my and my girlfriends weekend by bringing his stupid kid over without even asking. And we have company over, god damnit. Yeah so I tried to vent a bit and this is what happened, I'm sorry, the guy just isn't nice he makes me uncomfortable and he makes my girlfriend mad he is not a nice person. Just ughhhhh.

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From frustrations and awkward situations comes those raves and rants. As if we want to expel all that negative energy....A wonderful write. Pen on...:)..............

Posted 10 Years Ago


An angry rant of a piece that is quiet good at releasing some of your readers also, well done, good read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Good to express anger on paper. Sometimes words spoken can create more problems than help. A lot of frustration in the poem. I hope things are cool now. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


that's so mean.... :( Are talking about the kid to go and die?

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rivaxorus

10 Years Ago

No, the dad, kids cute, dad just ahhhhhh
Hunter Rose

10 Years Ago

LOL! In that case what a wonderful venting poem! hahaha

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Rivaxorus
Rivaxorus

Apple Valley, CA



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Hello there my name is Abby Lawless, although I do prefer the nickname Rivaxorus. I'm Seventeen years old and live in California. I love writing, I'm hoping to make a career and live off of working wi.. more..

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