So take your blessings

So take your blessings

A Poem by Rivaxorus
"

and shove em in a box for later years

"
If you're standing in the middle of a room
Take a few steps back
Before crashing into the wall
please

If you're trying to bake a cake
Open the oven
and shove yourself inside
no, don't

On second thought look out your window
Count how many birds there are
Then flop on the ground
fun

just remember don't stress and live in the moment
the little things make you feel better
like burgers
and pickles
and maybe just your face
can make you laugh


Give a laugh today
Make yourself feel better
just
don't do it in public
otherwise you'll look like a mad man

© 2014 Rivaxorus


Author's Note

Rivaxorus
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Awe, but I like laughing for no reason in public. =c
xD This is great, I love how random it is.
Well played! ^^

Posted 9 Years Ago


Well, I look like a madwoman anyway... Yes, it is always best to laugh each day! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like the simple and necessary logic of the poem. It is okay to smile and laugh. Not crazy, not allowing life to drive you nuts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


So Abby as I finish reading it get the superficiality and humour and of course here are moments when taking things too havily might not have a possitve effect on you. And that reminds me of an attitude very common nowadays I describe it as care free. I felt some it coming through however you sent an invite to somone who has no relation to this feeling whatsover so it is very hard for me to like it. Let me share with you what would have been funn for me. After crashing onto the wall and realising you broke your nose again you look up and look in the mirror while that blood covers the fred perry sign and you say to the nurse its alright that finally straighten it out! . And walk out there with a big smile in your face accpeting that life only sucks when get attached to the stuff that we imagine makes our selves "unique" and "special."

Thankyou for the invite Abby

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Rivaxorus
Rivaxorus

Apple Valley, CA



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Hello there my name is Abby Lawless, although I do prefer the nickname Rivaxorus. I'm Seventeen years old and live in California. I love writing, I'm hoping to make a career and live off of working wi.. more..

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