Arcade night

I wish there was more in our world

To express what is to come

To what we are feeling

To how I, feel about you

There are three words we use often

But it seems mediocre, so we say it a lot to make up for that

Yet, is there an image to replace those words

Something, far different

Like if a black hole were to kill us now

You'd be the first thing I'd think of

We'd be pulled into another universe

Where all the letters are upside down

noʎ ǝʌoן ı ʎɐs p,ı puɐ

ɹǝʇʇǝq ǝq p,ʇı ǝqʎɐɯ

ɐuıɥ�" ɹo uıɐʇunoɯ ɐ ǝʞıן s,ʇı

ʇoıpı uɐ ɯ,ı ɟı ʎɹɹos ɯ,ı

So we make the most of what we have

what we don't have

and wish for something more

And I could say a thousand words but none could amount to how I feel

I'm quiet, and you're not

The silence is a creepy realization of life

I love you with a red passion

As if a rose had over grown its roots

So what is a lame poem to cost

How does it mean anything

My heart beats fast for you

And I want to watch me step

If I make you mad, I want you to know

That I didn't mean to

That I love you

and everything I am loves you

Author's Note

mew. it's corny romance.

Reviews

[KeeD]

Its not corny, I see you mention black holes.. so i'm going to try to review it in a somewhat scientific way if that's okay. If the universe is constantly expanding; through the passage of time. Your heart is the singularity that gives his heart the beginning of time. It is this beginning where the theory of love came to life and through the words in your poem you prove this theory right. So somewhere through the vortex of the blackest of holes on either side I see two lovers souls, united by a corny romance.

[Rivaxorus]

It's a her ^w^ xD and thank you. You made it even more corny!!!! It's a good corny though.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A delightful and heartfelt prose, well done.