upright tumble

upright tumble

A Poem by Nobody.
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warning: reading this (epletive) may (verb) your (noun) completely!

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upright tumble

 

holes in giggles on kisses on holes

violation hugs from the sunshine fiends

lightning-gnawed Hell-hoax on wonder-saint X-rays

suck mutilated Bible bones ‘til sinner sod implodes

 

toxic gumdrop grins on a decorative lie

zombie jingles jangled by the wise men dolts

belly-flop a monster hope in dapper-dud dens

where holy hidden huckleberries hop the holey hype

 

swing to the rose on a rosary rope swing

tickets to the skyline hallelujah hootenanny

everlasting overjoyed, undercooked wretches

water-walking spray and washed snow-lily souls

 

fall up to everything on nothing that can fall

all is forgiven by the driven king of all

starts where it ends when it ends where it starts

and the wings shall sprout where the horns once were

 

“and that’s the way it goes!”

© 2010 Nobody.


Author's Note

Nobody.
sing the last line like Andy Kaufman....makes the whole thing more fun.

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I'm with Robin on the 200 mph alliterative word race... And here I was thinking an upright tumble might be... Oh never mind!
I'm reminded of revival church meetings with wholesale salvation offered for a small fee. But I could be mixing the metaphor and subject completely. At least I can never complain that this poet's work does not make me think...ponder...shake my head. Smile.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This one, I understand. I think. Like, I may not understand YOUR intended meaning, but I pull a whole, complete meaning from it, and I love it. From the first line to the last, it's delicious.

Gorgeous work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is awsome, brilliant and the flow is a circus at night, with asll
the neon lights, a totally prolific piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm with Robin on the 200 mph alliterative word race... And here I was thinking an upright tumble might be... Oh never mind!
I'm reminded of revival church meetings with wholesale salvation offered for a small fee. But I could be mixing the metaphor and subject completely. At least I can never complain that this poet's work does not make me think...ponder...shake my head. Smile.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you ever stand by a race track and something goes by you at 200 mph , you dont know what it was , but you say, man ... that was cool

totally surreal

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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