Fire

210 cell types, all infused with throbbed lust. Wheeze as if dying, and slobber rapacious red thirst. Quivered pink apertures salivate, even in slumber, for candy behind glass, cash wads tucked into denim, and warm flesh calling silken siren songs from blue rayon cliffs. Strained jester scepters serpent moist caves like bullets projected through steely black chambers. Oh fire! Oh sinew! Ride on!

Hungry tongues that hang, warm and bodiless, in the cold evening air, beg and cajole to worm the tickly dermis, and light the sacred mental torches at all 4 corners of the bone helm altar. Prometheus krumps naked on a writhen meaty platform held by 400 tan Greek bodies; slithering, heat distorted serpents of Eden. Forbidden Pandora fruit drips with sugary sweat. Whole of the body shivers and moans. Weakness masquerades as power behind the spellbound eye, and the mouse falls over the lion to feast on its mighty girth. Oh pleasure! Oh pain! Ride sweet on waves of hot, wet blood.

Life laced with deathwish. Time trickled from erect pink n*****s. Ice of civility melts away for an explosive moment, and the wolves take charge of the night. Howl with me upon nimbus sheets. Squirm with me upon this flawless imperfection. Touch the flame. We’ll let it lick us dry, and char our bones into glorious spirits; ash upon the breeze of a breathy forever. Oh fire! Oh soul! Ride on!

Ride hard!    

Reviews

[Melobldnfr]

Hold the press! You've got my attention right away: "...rapacious red thirst." The word "rapacious" I've afore used to describe my father's hair. It's in a chapter book I've written, and now methinks maybe I should post here sometime.

Also, "nimbus" is another of my favorites. Thanks for sharing!

[Nobody.]

Ah, yes. A few ofmy favorite words as well.
AND, I've just gotten inspired to write about the
The rapacious colored nimbus of an angry young sunset....or sunrise? hmmm. May be just a spoiled child in the sky throwing a tantrum? Or a wild eyed angel falling from the morning star holding his/her wounded ego in trembling bloodstained hands? Well, anyway, you've inspired me. I have to go write now. :) THANK YOU!
Cheers!

[Melobldnfr]

:-D Awesome. Just awesome. Super glad to be of inspiration! 8->

[Ken Simm.]

A word film. Actually a word epic film with a true bardic touch. Actually a filmed song with ancient music sung to a crowded hall in firelight.

[Nobody.]

thanks Ken. I'd loveto sing it to a firelit mead hall. Cheers!

[Blessed_Angel]

Love the flow of this poem. This is true beuty in poetry i love it. You have a true talent.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Rules!

[joshua deathdealer]

This is pure talent. Original and captivating to say the least..most excellent work..xx

[Lily Mae]

This is mind blowing. I love it from top to bottom and well.. ride on and ride hard...what more could ever be said or more wanted lol :) xx

[Ruth]

OK..I am seriously running out of words lol
So......I shall say this...and I mean it sincerely!
You have awesome talent...I prickle when I read your work!
Thrilling!
xoxo

[K.C. Zbryk]

This is simply amazing. I dont even know if there are wods that can describe how amazing this is. Like a nightmare twisted into reality and riddled with history vocabulary and imagry that leaves the reader feeling abused at the end. But like a sadist i had to reread this just to experience it all over again. Just incredable

[Josephine Nive]

WHOA! That's hot! Good job!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

It simply sings ans squeels at me, provockative and agile, well done, good read.