|| Quantum Mechanics and love.

ROM (my read only memory).

I think of you and me.
That we are like electrons.
The same but not exacting.
Our journeys as orbitals.
One nucleus, one objective.
And then we fall in love with each other.
Our degenerate levels rebel.
But we keep forgetting that, when we come close.
Our nature is to repel.

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

its an unstable relationship love, told with finesse. i so enjoyed this excellent piece of writing.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

The science of love explained in a sharp focussed piece of free verse with a salutary tale to tell.

[S. S. Allen]

Thank you. ;). Love is science I guess.

[Tony Jordan]

This reminded me of a book I read called "I hate you! Don't leave me".
Some people arouse such passion in us but the same passion can be a double-edged sword in a relationship.
I like the use of technical/scientific terminology, which I had to look up.

[S. S. Allen]

Thank you! I would like to read that book BTW. And I agree that these passions can end up in something chaotic, because of the differences between individuals who claim to be in love but know they are Bella incompatible.

[S. S. Allen]

*hella (correction)

[Tony Jordan]

The book is actually available online for free as a pdf document !! (I just found out) - here's the link

https://www.cappcny.org/home/media/i-hate-you-dont-leave-me.pdf

[S. S. Allen]

Thank you ever so much Tony! :)