Fears

My biggest fears were always spiders and the dark.

Now my biggest fear is losing you.

So now the spiders seem smaller,

and the dark seems brighter,

But you feel farther and farther away.

Author's Note

Feedback? Positive and negative is welcome! I'm trying to pick good pieces for my book so feedback would help a lot!

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The analogy here with a relationship and the fear of what was when you were younger...and the fear of losing a person you care about in the lines of this verse...

[MikeV]

Short and to the point, i loved it
Keep it up :)

[Serena Monteleone]

Thank you so much!