Cruel Fate

Cruel Fate

A Poem by Shadow9x20
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My view of the world through God's eyes

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To be a god

To be a god is the cruelest of fates.
Stuck alone with no hope of escape.
All bonds formed fade away in eternity.
Forced to bear the weight of all uncertainty.


A writer of tragedies and distain.
Forever forced to endure this pain.
A message misinterpreted by greed throughout history.
A plague of guilt and blame chained to his story.


A species undeserving led astray.
His existence used as a scapegoat for this worlds dismay.
Ignored and named a mistake.
People gain fame through his ways yet live lives fake.

 

Only able to watch in tears.
Never able to calm their fears.
Always knowing that all he can do is wait.
Truly to be a god is the cruelest of fates.
People gain fame through his ways yet live lives fake.
Only able to watch in tears.
Never able to calm their fears.
Always knowing that all he can do is wait.
Truly to be a god is the cruelest of fates...at for this worlds dismay.
Ignored and named a mistake.
People gain fame through his ways yet live lives fake.
Only able to watch in tears.
Never able to calm their fears.
Always knowing that all he can do is wait.
Truly to be a god is the cruelest of fates...

 

 

 

© 2013 Shadow9x20


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I agree with Vidya Bacchus: refreshing words well-written, fluid, with thought-provoking ideas within.
And your profile quotation is great.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shadow9x20

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot and I tried to make it as good as I could
i like how you write,your words are nice and fluid.Good job

Posted 10 Years Ago


Shadow9x20

10 Years Ago

thanks im glad you liked it ill keep posting so I hope you stay tuned
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

I will most definitely do that

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Added on November 18, 2013
Last Updated on November 18, 2013
Tags: God, religion, greed, corruption, belief, perspective, lonely, understanding, faith, mistake, poem, poetry

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