Betrayed

Betrayed

A Poem by Shane
"

Traitors..lowest forms of life on this planet of ours

"

Just think..we could have been such good friends,

hell, we were good friends.

The first time, I lost control, but I came to forgive you,

and you started to earn back my respect even.

But then,

betrayal..

you attept to steal the one I love,

right behind my back.

I swore I would say nothing,

do nothing.

So I will simply inform you-

You have lost all respect, trust, and everything

I once had for you,

You have no honor,

as far as I'm concerned,

your worth little more than dirt.

 

© 2008 Shane


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Posted 16 Years Ago


I've taught Chinese street fighting and I say to my students " if you can understand how the desire to punch someone else is reflective, like hitting yourself, then you've already come a long way". "who are you here to fight and who is it you defend yourself from?"
This is good honest, clear communication. With flair and just enough foreboding. Keep on.
Robin

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on April 29, 2008
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Shane
Shane

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I'm Shane, I reside in PA fighting is my true passion, In the cage, my nickname in Mad Dog.. My girlfriend is amazing, I believe in the L word again, I'm helping her through some hard times and proble.. more..

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