I'm not here anymore

I cry for your help

and feel still your loneliness

I want drink your pain

but you give me just emptiness

Without any love

I can't grow in you and watch into your eyes

without any heart beside

I can't hold the burden of your sweet lies

You open my wounds

it doesn't hurt me

You close my soul

and make me feel

now I'm gone

I tried to be real

so many times I've heard

that you dont need me no more

I cant look into your eyes

cause there  only I see

all the pain 'n' hate you put on me

without you I cant go on

I'm not here anymore

I wanted to know

why you called me a w***e

and quick had gone before

Reviews

[A. Amos]

Your heart, soul are deeply felt in your poetry...honest write and I admire your skills!

[ShaDavi]

Inspiring...Love it!
I feel this piece, each word and phrase deeply touched my spirit.

[Roger Turgeon]

That numb feeling does make you seem to be "not there anymore".... time will allow you to find yourself again. A few English glitches but the feelings all came through. Nice job ( : O )