Gone for too long

Gone for too long

A Poem by Shawn Morgan

Ive been gone for so long, i cant remember how to read the maps anymore. can someone help me??

i can barely even see.....

my glasses use to be beating inside my chest but someone stole them and broke them....

the tears smear my lenses, and they're so tattered and in need of repair that i dont know if they can be fixed now

 

© 2011 Shawn Morgan


Author's Note

Shawn Morgan
They say a man can only be alone for so long before the man's mind is gone

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i understand that, its all that came to me at the moment, i couldnt think of anything else to expound on. its basically saying i see with my heart, but its been broken so much that now my view is so distorted, and i dont know if anything can fix it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Take out the double question mark, add punctuation and formatting first, otherwise. I think this needs to be expanded so that I can actually understand what idea you are getting at. Right now I am unsure of the message that is being put out there.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Shawn Havoc aka Billy Shawn Morgan. those of you who dont know me im a good guy you just have to get past my fucked up mind lol fyi Shawn Havoc is my nick name more..

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