Invisible

This poem is how i feel seen by a girl that i like, it has personal meaning along with other meaning that almost everyone at one point has felt with a crush they had.

I wish to be heard

I wish to be seen

I wish not to be tortured 

by this beautiful girl

I see her glow

I see her beauty

I see her smile at me

But only from pity

She sees me not

She sees an empty seat

She sees all others

but our eyes never meet

I am not heard

I am not seen

I am not known

by this Beautiful girl

She may see others

She may not see me

But all that I know

She is all that I see

Author's Note

i wrote this in class one day and i like the idea behind it but do you think there are things that i could ad to it? or is this a good length? also do you think the flow is good enough? thank you for your feedback in advance.

Reviews

[dillonjensen]

Third stanza, last line you used the incorrect form of a word. It should be "meet" instead of "meat." Loved the poem though bro, I wouldn't change a thing other than that, it's really great because I can relate to something like this.