Sunrise (Acrostic Slant)

Sunrise shall bring to us all its promises

Unveiling ultraviolet rays, as clear to you

Night skies now slipping away and then

Right in view robins sing to us in a choir

In these moments I listen closely, as I

Savor all their soft songs in my dreams

Enjoying the moment each felt with love

 

Reviews

[Firestone Feinberg]

GREAT! How difficult to make this form of poem and to have it make sense too. This is delightful! David

[Dr. Wood ?]

very cleverly done..I have only just started doing acrostics they are a great puzzle...maybe you might check them out and give me your expert opinion..This one is quite sensational

[Aesthete2000]

Promises! Yes, a new day, new start.
Peaceful and rewarding, your piece,
A quite wondrous acrostic.

Not sure about the points thingies---will go for 100--
I like it!!!

M-C