Through and Through

Through a Veil 

                I Watch 

Through a mask 

                I Smile

Through the chain 

                I Feel 

Through  the Walls 

                 I Speak

Through the Impossible 

                 I Love 

                

                 

Reviews

[Mr. Lopez]

Alright sheer terror, I know you well and for that reason I know you can take it. So.... I'm not scared yet. I see you , but im not hearing all of you. I say this because I know for a fact that you are deep thinker with a beautifully dramatic flair and you have a passionate heart. All the makings for a great writer. So as your long time friend I say, let these people have it! Show them the depth and the darkness of your well of emotion.....come out ,come out, wherever you are. I know that you're testing the waters here so let me make a point....
Through a mask I smile
Through a chain I feel
These lines are are brilliant. Simple yet so effective. My point being is that if this is you just testing the waters I can only imagine the wave you will make when you finally decide to jump in. Don't ever be afraid to be you because here........you are among friends. I've got my eye on you and am looking forward to seeing you come out of your shell.