BREAKING ROCKS

BREAKING ROCKS

A Poem by TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror
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"gestures in a fallout"

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a rise of debris
gestures in a fallout 
created with a swing
a strike to shatter
smash and crush
pebbles scraping 
gravel spilling free
clinging dust 
bruises and cuts 
pause to breath
the loyal winds
toss about scatters
letters of hope
words etched in stone
cement rows of sorrow
beg and borrow
the weight of belief
a place of need
raises high 
and falls again
forward and back 
the click and clack 
pebbles to stones 
rubble to ash
cinders of past 
a shadows leap 
wake sandy bones
dusty faces beneath
holding dearly departed
pressing a burden
angles to gravity
provoke
the weight of a hammer 

Terry D'Arcy-Ryan

© 2019 TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror


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i like where you took us to explore though sad. tough place to be. burdens weighing heavy upon us. only we can get ourselves through it - one rock at a time. let that hammer fall, heavy as it may be and start breaking up the grief. time can wear down anything, even a boulder ... :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

3 Weeks Ago

Pete,
I appreciate the review , I wasnt sure of this one at first but it just kept haunting .. read more
wonderful write good withe expression.

Posted 4 Months Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

3 Weeks Ago

Weeping Willow , I appreiate you review , thank you

Sheer Terror
This is Good.
Very descriptive and well written.
What I see here about life is that, "In the transformation from one form to another in life, there is always a hard time to face."
The breaking of rock forms soil or debris as you called it, but it takes a lot of processes.

I really enjoyed reading it, Terry.
And I'm glad it speaks to me.

Posted 5 Months Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

4 Months Ago

Kay, I am glad it speaks to you as well. I was writing about a place of mourning and letting go. .. read more
Kay Salisu Titilola

4 Months Ago

My pleasure...
and so many peoples fingers is on that button,and most are crazy

Posted 5 Months Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

4 Months Ago

Wordman, thank you for the review

SheerTerror
 wordman

4 Months Ago

you`re welcome

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TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror
TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror

PHOENIX, AZ



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When I was a young girl I was your average Tomboy. I lived to watch Star Trek the only thing that could take me away from the voyages of the Star Ship Enterprise was playing Baseball with the boys. .. more..

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