I Wonder Why

I Wonder Why

A Poem by Sheila Marie Carr

I Wonder Why

 

I wonder why the sky is blue

I wonder why it changes too

Why the moon sets in the sky?

I question myself and wonder why

I wonder why the trees are tall

I wonder why they have to fall

I wonder why the sun shines bright

And why the moon shines at night

I wonder why we have to die

And why do people have to lie

I know there are things before my eyes

That cannot be answered or questioned why

© 2009 Sheila Marie Carr


Author's Note

Sheila Marie Carr
We all have questions, in which sometimes there are no answers.

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Great job! Cute poem.

There's only 1 thing I noticed that was repetitive:

"Why the moon sets in the sky?
I question myself and wonder why" -- You wonder why, but you also say "why" in the previous line. I'm not really sure how you'd edit this...but I'm sure you can figure out something! :)

Again...absolutely adorable poem. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Great job! Cute poem.

There's only 1 thing I noticed that was repetitive:

"Why the moon sets in the sky?
I question myself and wonder why" -- You wonder why, but you also say "why" in the previous line. I'm not really sure how you'd edit this...but I'm sure you can figure out something! :)

Again...absolutely adorable poem. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

whoa! major freaky! i wrote a poem like this one! but its on paper not on here and it has the same title too.
but your is great!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Sheila Marie Carr
Sheila Marie Carr

Apopka, FL



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My name is Sheila Carr, I am 51 years old My passion is writing, reading, drawing and listening to music My motto is "I'm a survivor" My dreams are to become a published writer, and to leave my leg.. more..

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