Losing Who Iam

 

Iam losing myself, to the world around me

Sunken into despair, and drowning in my grief

The days passes by, like a theif in the night

So deep into darkness, I can't even see the light

 

Losing who Iam, or the person I could be

Has broken me down, and hurt me so badly

How can I repair, what I have lost inside me

Iam bound by chains and locks, and captured unjustly

 

I've lost my courage, my strength, and my goals

Now my life is spinning, totally out of control

My heart and my mind, has become very weak

My future seems grim, and so very bleak

 

Losing who Iam, just cannot be

I want to be happy, and eternally free

If I'm not careful, I will lose it all

Everything Iam, will crumble down and fall

 

 

Reviews

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

I know that feeling..once lost who I was .. became something else.. then that was lost too and became better than the self I lost..maybe it is ok to lose .. a self.. as long as we move to a better self and sometimes it takes that old self getting pretty hurt..anyhow..not seeing the light and it not being there are two different things.. well written..poem

[Jason]

Wow....what an excellent work of art. I must admit, this is much how I feel right now...even though it is a bit gloomy...the most real and raw of emotions will always be the most powerful. Excellent job on this! I really enjoyed reading!

Jay