Life with you

Love is a beautiful thing that comes deep within

Life with you just feels so right
It's like sailing in an ocean with open light and wind blowing through your hair with
All it's might

Life with you just feels so right
It's like sunshine that fills the bright sky or stars on a dark night

Life with you just feels so right
It's like a child eating candy with a smile so bright

Life with you is all I ever wanted
Because baby, you simply fill my heart with so much delight.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"Life with you just feels so right
It's like sailing in a ocean with open light and wind blowing through your hair with
All it's might"

I like the rhyming scheme here. It gives good flow to the poem.
It's a beautiful love poem.

Good work 👍

[Shenny]

Thank you !

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome 😊

[APOORVA]

Life with you just feels so right
It's like sunshine that fills the bright sky or stars on a dark night



an extremely loving feel
awesome

[Shenny]

Yes it is. Thank you!