I watch the blood fall

Its a bit of a sad one but its my best work

I watch the blood fall

Dripping down the page

Scream for me

Whimper for me

 

Do you need me now?

 

I’ve needed you but where were you?

 

And I screamed it once and then a thousand times

 

My blood was dripping down

Cascading like a waterfall

 

Crying for a soft landing

I found nothing

But rocks

 

So you want me to be your silver lining?

 

Never again will I succumb to your poison

 

Your burning desire to hurt and burn

 

I feel it kicking inside

That urge…

That desire…

To crumble to your seduction…

But

Never will I be able to endure your power

Of pain and torture.

 

No time to crumble to your pain and torture

No time to wait for you

No time to wait

No time to breath

 

Sometimes I bite the hand that feeds me but shall I endure your blood-curdling scream?

Are you but the Lilith to my pain and sadness?

Its mistress?

Immaculate in everything you do?

Pristine and perfect?

Like the porcelain of serenity?

 

Shall I ever break through your porcelain eyes

To see what lurks in your mind

Crawling in the dirt and dust like a minion to Hades?

 

Scream for my serenity for it is made of the thinnest glass

The most transparent silk

Of temptation

As the scourge of my sanity

The torturous screams howl

Begging for my hand

To stop beating your mind like drum

Of human skin and bone

Bleeding and torturous

 

I watch you scream

I lust for it

For the end to come

And swallow you whole into the gates of Satan

To become his spawn

His end

His annihilation

 

Yet I write these words

Is it my fate?

 

You’re all alone in your cold dark cave of pity and dismay

Begging for forgiveness are we?

Do you need help?

We don’t want you

Nobody does nobody will

And nobody ever did

 

The gates of hell bear a plaque

For you

It shows your scourge in all of its glory

All of its decay and its oscillating glory

 

Your walls burn down around you

Decrepit fear

 Coagulating like a blood clot

Your endless malevolence will end tonight

 

I drive down the stake

Cracking through the cage of beating life

Pummelling your black heart

Into the abyss

 

Well is there an afterlife?

You slave to satan

I almost feel sorry for you and your endless pain

But no never shall i relinquish your death

 

I told you that you wouldn’t be missed and you aren’t...

I warned that this is the end...

You didn’t listen like always...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[freelancejouster]

this is powerful and captivating, and in all honesty, it gives me chills and occasionally repulses me... but. there are a few parts where it reads awkwardly, and the first few stanzas almost seem unnecessary to the rest of it, not anywhere near as powerful as what comes after. and there are a few points during the story where the 'i' almost seems sadistic and unfeeling... there is a point between revenge and evil for the sake of evil, and the sadism is the crossing point. if the 'i' finds pleasure his revenge, he seems almost as disgusting as the one who hurt him in the first place. otherwise, i've no complaints, this was thrilling :)

[Celeste21]

I think this will have to be my favorite poem by you. More of your soul seems embedded in it. Incredible. The beginning jumps out at you. I like when a writer keeps my interest through just the first words uttered.

[?]

You write with such power and force.
oooooh you are a dark one. lol

[Madison A. Wright]

this is an extremely powerful and emotional poem. i love it... you deff poured ur heart and soul into it! awesome job!!

[Heather D]

wow. so powerful and emotional. very visual. you bring your despair through to your readers very well!

[guiltyascharged]

Wow. Niiiice. A very powerful read. I wonder, if we write about death and what is to come, will we get what we write, or the opposite? You explained that perfectly. Death is but a mystery for none of us to know until we all experience it. For all we know, there could be no God, there's no more proof that there is one God then the next. And nobody but the dead know what there truly is after this life.

[Kate Hunter]

very deep and emotional. The words portray a vivid image of the story and the emotions. Nice job.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

another poem very well done

[M.Babu]

Your descriptive power is astounding. This poem is so vivid the power it exudes is phenomenal. I'll admit it started a a bit slow to me but it managed to suddenly build up and elbow through roughly in the end, which definitely did it for me. This was a great poem, deserving of every compliment it has received. Great work

[Short.Nerd]

A very powerful poem! Its a great poem. KEep up the good work.

[♥Chloe-The-Zombi..]

this is so powerful! it gave me chills down my spine and it has a lot of description. really good! i love it! 100/100