The inevitable

Just a little something :D

The shadows are creeping

The lights are dimming

 

Torturous erotica enrages

Satanic mantra defies

Consuming all in it's path

 

This is the end of the cycle of life

It is what awaits us all

A demonic consequence

 

Of what you have done...

 

It bares down upon us

Crushing all

Yet seducing, prior

Lulling all into a false pretence

 

This is the end...

 

I'll catch you up soon enough...

 

B***h...

Reviews

[Katub]

..ouch

[♥Chloe-The-Zombi..]

hmm...
i have to admit (and i am VERY VERY sorry for this) that your meaning is a little bit unclear. but overall its a good poem and it displays your emotions good.

[freelancejouster]

your brash language and strong images captivate off-handedly. in the line 'of what you have done' the ellipses at the end almost diminishes the power held there, as if you're uncertain, where this line should be purposefully nailed down. the last three lines almost have the same purpose, just fading out instead of ending as powerfully as if began and strides throughout. your last stanza before those last three lines, is coincidentally, by absolute favorite :)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good efforts..!!