You are my bro

You are my bro

A Poem by Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of Poetry
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Written for my best friend Seph :)

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My best friends are my family

Are my family

 

And you, my friend

Are my bro

 

My darkness in light

My slumbering symphony

Of tremolo picking

 

You were there

When I needed to smile

You were there

When I needed a reality check

 

When I cried

You made me laugh

 

When I skulked in the pits of depression

You threw me a rope

 

I love you bro

© 2011 Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of Poetry


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Love it! Brothers can be a pain but they're great too :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aww so sweet. So kind of you.

Posted 13 Years Ago


An awesome tribute poem. I really love these lines:

My darkness in light
My slumbering symphony
Of tremolo picking

Excellent write, Sherb.

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is sweet and quite lovely. more examples of each way he's helped you would add even more to this wonderfulness.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was so different from your dark style bro:)

I liked this because i had once tried to develop this point of view but i failed miserably. So i really like how you've kept it simple and to the point. Brings out the power of brotherhood if you ask me.

Well described:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


A very positive poem. The description was amazing. We need family and friend to keep us balance. A very good ending to a excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


This poem shows a true friend and I think it is easy to relate to. Everyone should have a friend that is there when you need them. They should be there to help you through hard times but should also tell you when you need to get it in gear. I think your poem describes this perfectly. I love your descriptions and the images they create. Great poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow!!!! Amazing dedication.

"You were there
When I needed to smile
You were there
When I needed a reality check"

Posted 13 Years Ago


awwww, bromance!! XD love it! great poem, you must have an awesome friend!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Freinds! We need 'em, and I'm glad you have someone like Steph! :}

Posted 13 Years Ago



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