A reply to a love torn memory

A reply to a love torn memory

A Poem by Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of Poetry

I see the words on the screen
A plea to me?
A plea to the one who tried?
A plea to the one that was there?
I miss the days of our happiness
But I need to think of me 
And you really aren't good for me
I miss you?
Yes
I care for you?
Yes
But you wanna know something?
I'm sick of trying 
Trying to make you smile when all around is darkness 
I was there with a candle when the shadows loomed 
But you put out my candle of hope
With your venomous spittle
And then you go against my words
So I wait for the catastrophe 
And the tears
And all I will say is "I told you so"

© 2011 Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of Poetry


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I really like. Good Job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can understand the pain behind this one.. it's especially sad when the two care but just can't find their way to the middle ground...xx great write

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of Poetry
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I am Sherb of Sherbs Dreaming tree, Come inside and see, My marvellous range of tea. Haha Im Sherb I love poetry, it was my life for wuite a while and i have been suffering an 18 month block .. more..

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