watching aviate above and escape

watching aviate above and escape

A Poem by Shirlena

Watched someone loose a friend and clammer as she saw it fade at the last minute...sometimes you have to be willing to be wrong (when you really are) in order to keep a good friend.

gather around tightly...I'm amusing
consistently a pleasure as frankness is elusive
except for the witty repartee, quick jest
resting is stupidity, arrested expression

as I have denied

best confidant ever met been truth to me
every attribute opposite is my failure to be
have to repent but where's the release
how is it I have chosen to skate sauntering by
painted lips usher's lies of mine
red rouged of hers have captured disguise

a staunch rejection to extinguish my ways
until last ditch effort at watching a friend retreat

grasping heights over it escapes
abandons a sorrowful face

© 2015 Shirlena

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you are so very right. sometimes we just have to be wrong.

Posted 8 Years Ago


8 Years Ago

At least that has been my continuous experience however, if you are in a relationship where you have.. read more
Be truthful to yourself before others and acknowledge your mistakes is what I get from this wonderful poem. It takes less pride and humility...Excellent...:)..........

Posted 8 Years Ago


8 Years Ago

Hey there Sami,

Long time :). I partly agree but people for the most part just don't .. read more
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

Ok. You are welcome...:).....

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Added on May 4, 2015
Last Updated on May 4, 2015
Tags: friendship, lose, sad



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A Poem by Shirlena