You Love Them More Than Me

You Love Them More Than Me

A Poem by ShittyBakaFace
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about drug user

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Where were you?
When I needed you?
Oh wait...
Thats right.
You were with one of them.
Her specifcally.

Everytime I need you,
Your With her.
Her with her sleek body
Her kisses like pricks on the flesh
when she injects you with her "love"
When she makes you see the good things you want to see.
She, the one that hurts me.

Everytime I see you,
Your with the ghostly one,
She who you burn alive everytime you see her
She who makes it hard to breathe in return.
You seem to soar when your with her.
Then you come crashing down in a fit of fear.
the ghostly one that hurts me.

Everytime I think about you,
I see you with the scary one.
She makes you act weird.
your not yourself when your with her.
You always continue to put peices of her in your mouth
and when you run out....
you cry and cry and cry
for more.
the scary one that hurts me.

When you come to me,
You've been with the worst one.
The one you thrive on
the one you drink your hate from everyday
The one that makes you hurt the ones you love
The worst one that hurts me the most.

I cant keep doing this.
I cant keep getting hurt.
Im DONE

Tell me when you have figured out who you love the most...

them
or
me

© 2009 ShittyBakaFace


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very deep and emotional, i like your work a lot :) keep writing and i shall keep reading.
lee :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


this was expressed well, i can see you put thought and emotion into this composition, i adore your work. A+ , its truly beautiful and filled with morbid passion.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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