I looked into those eyes

I looked into those eyes 

As a part of her dies; 

I didn't ask 

She didn't answer. 

Who is this lady 

I wondered... 

On the outside she is lovely 

From the inside a catastrophe// 

 

She is bred from the same blood 

Been in the same place; 

Yet there is something she hid 

And never let it show on her face. 

She didn't lie, 

But never told the truth 

If you demanded for it, she would repel 

If you didn't, she would never tell.

 

I stood there confused, 

Staring into those eyes 

As they held all the mysteries, 

Till she died.

Author's Note

A poem laced with reality and images of my mind, as this lady haunts my dreams. My muse.
Do review!

Reviews

[Confuser]

Shivai: OMG: Really, a dream like that...intriguing. It's a haunting tell alright: I looked into those eye, is like a horror tale...but if she gets you to write poetry this well, all the better. On the outside she is lovely - From the inside a catastrophe// It is always hard to tell who someone is...She didn't lie, but never told the truth. I love it. Powerful poem!

[Shivai]

Thank you so much Dale!
Ah, the poem was actually written on my sister "bred from same blood", she is creepy. Just kidding. But there was a time we weren't as close as we should've been. So the poem is on those "dark days", except here my thriller imagination kicked in and changed the genre completely... XP
Thank you once again!

[Confuser]

BAD GIRL!!!! But I love it....I am beginning to LOVE dark creepy poems. Exceptional. I actually thought: God, i don't wish to dream like that....(gullible)...d

[Shivai]

Haha, you wouldn't call me a bad girl if you knew what all I had gone through because of my sister, Jeez, elder sisters!
Thanks again!

[Confuser]

You're welcome!

[wordman]

the mind is a mystery in it`s self,you portrayed it very well
with your dreams,or visions of your self maybe

[shardha sharma]

It's wonderful. The poem shows suspense and pain as well.Lovely writing !

[Shivai]

Thank you!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

images of people..... random people....... haunts me too, often.......i wonder about them.......but will never really know anyone of them....... that bothers me......but there isn't much of an option.....
creepy right?
well this is beautifully written.....some eyes will haunt us forever
i loved it......
:)

[Shivai]

Yes, that is exactly what sometimes happens with me!
Thank you so much!

[HummingMaster]

Very great, expressing and mysterious
I love the part "On the outside she is lovely
From the inside a catastrophe"

[Shivai]

Thank you Ghaith! I am glad you like it!!