MUTE

Internal conflicts

Struggling inside

No vigor

To spill them out..

Every one in 

their pace

For me,who will 

slow down?

When this silence 

will break down?

Seems as it

Mute of Life is on

Where pictures moves

each day

Without any 

motion and sound....

Reviews

[Confuser]

Anne: Sounds like we all get; a never ending list, it keeps coming and we're tired, but life goes on - more problems to conquer. We need to find some peace. No? The poem is wonderful like all yours. Enjoyed every single word. Thanks Dale

[anne]

thanks dear..yeah we need that peace anyhow...:))

[Confuser]

My pleasure!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Very good use of description in the poem. Made the word mute have meaning and reason. Thank you Anne for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[anne]

thank you CP...

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Anne.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Silence is not the absence of sound, I think it's full of feelings and understanding, it's an encounter with your inner self, it's a lightning without the thunder. Like the flow of ideas you started in me with your poem, Anne. Very well done. :) Rudi

[anne]

thank you so much CP..your vision with such things is commendable...always nice to see you..

[Dayran]

Something is grinding to a halt. Better check the batteries.

[anne]

haha...thanks Dayran..:))

[Ana B.]

A beautiful, original piece. Lovely write :)

[anne]

thank you so much Ana..always appreciate your kind heart...:))