The Likoki Saga

This is the first book of a series I wrote about 3 years ago. It took me 3 and a half years to write, and it is laying around my house in about 6 different notebooks so the process of adding it to the computer and editing it are very cumbersome. I would love to read any reviews you have of it, and of course critques are most welcomed. Thank you very much for taking the time to read my story, I hope you enjoyed it.