Wandering Thoughts...!!!

What is life he asked?
A puzzle or a missing piece of puzzle....

It is a meaningless piece of art without you, she mumbled!!
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History repeats itself, we started as strangers and will end up like one, he said
While she was confused between two names for their baby girl....!!!!
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I hope we could be together, his message said

I am still waiting for you... her draft read..!!!!
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"Wait for me", he said
"Till eternity", she said
Forgetting eternity was just a word for her.... !!!!

Reviews

[Aya]

it's all good and all but for me the exclamation points and all the periods are a bit distracting, but its just an opinion of mine the voice inside my head cannot read it as *silent and screams* because of the "...!!!" but overall its good, keep up !

[Crazy Overthinker]

Thank you Aya for your feedback. I will try to look at my writings from that perspective too...!!

[revalatia]

This piece certainly makes me think.... The ending yields many an interesting conclusions. Nicely done. Thank you for sharing.