Hallway

Hallway

A Poem by Shy Girl
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High School. Not much more to say there.

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Hidden in plain sight.

Do they see the lump?

Can you see the hole behind?

Turn around quick...

Dodge line of contact.

Slip into shadows' cast

Count two...three...step

Spy a spot tween times ticks.

Small of thought shrinks self.

Can you see me?

© 2011 Shy Girl


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Not really, you're in a dark corner, but I can hear you. Nice write. It reminds me of my high schools hallways, dodging people to try and get across.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow captures feelings of what goes through ones head in the situation of being in high school and trying to work out ones own behaviour and others and doing what needs to be done simply to survive what really is an environment that can be so different to any other in life, excellent indeed :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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so very well expressed
i used to try and stay out
of sight too

Posted 12 Years Ago


I wish too, yet you choose to remain hidden

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 29, 2011
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Shy Girl
Shy Girl

Horse Country, MT



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Never really been a sharer of my poems. Been writing on and off since junior high. I'm mostly shy and listen to my mp3 player or radio for EVERYTHING I'm doing. From riding my horse to sitting in t.. more..

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