two makes One

I will carry your name forever more

I knew as soon as you came to my door

that you were the only soul for me

A true love times infinity.

 

Within your eyes I see the Light

of a thousand moons shining bright

Within your heart I feel the warmth

as if we are by our winter's hearth.

 

Within your soul I see the dance

Sparking thought with each loving glance

Your mind flips in coniptions upon your tongue

Taking me always to where it begun.

 

Our first sight love affair

A true love that noone should dare

to put asunder

as the wonder of our beings molded

together as One will always

sustain any foe or folly

that passes our way

and to this day

I love you madly

it is true, a whole connection has

pulled us through

many difficult times yet we have

survived those trying moments

when we thought it through

fought the battles, me and you

united we stand

hand in hand

enjoying the company, the inadequacies

though the love is a beacon that

lights our way like midnight's

Venus without sway.

 

Together we can withstand

any animosity, forever united

forever bound, two against all

that may befall our path

Unconditional Love that shall surpass

the trials, the tribulation of life general

that call upon us from time to time

I am yours and you are mine.

 

Upon first sight we froze in our steps

love heated immediately

how can this be that we are so blessed

to have found our final rest

within on another's embrace

in any case

it happened thus

that you, that I, became Us

my love is tender, my love is dear

in your arms I feel no fear.

 

Upon first glance sight once again

we became more that just friends

lovers and mates are we

now living sweetly in harmony

combining our family trees

to create anew, a pair mighty

without you I can not see

a future bright or kind

without you I'd lose my mind

in longing, in missing

the only one

that understands me

sees me for who I am

one who is strong and weak at the same time.

 

With you I gather strength

you quench my thirst for Love Divine

answer my prayers everytime

now joined together in unison

the angels sing a hymn

of rejoice

for our choice

to trust one another explicitly

dance the waltz of true tranquility

you and me

together conquered the frivalous things

that stand in the way of paupers and kings

united as One

we dance the Light of lovers

shining forth as brightly as Papa Sun

it is as if we were

two makes One.

 

 

Reviews

[K Antonacci]

I love the words that you chose for this piece.

"A true love that noone should dare
to put asunder"

"to trust one another explicitly
dance the waltz of true tranquility
you and me"

Very, very simple yet complicated? Does that make sense? I think that you used creative words that illuded to the same idea, but i like the structure of it.

Great, great job!
Love,
K

[Tina-Sue]

Beautiful.
What journey this piece led me through.
There is sweetness and depth in this-not always an easy combo to strike.