Bullseye!

I'm bored...

Watermelon sweet

drips down my cheeks

and chin

as I smile with a juicy grin

seeds between teeth

Ready - Aim - FIRE

SPIT

 

Watermelon sweet

what a treat

this late Spring eve

as we play

Ready - Aim - FIRE

SPIT

A hit

right between the thighs

of what a prize

a Bullseye!

 

 

Reviews

[Arthur Henn]

You are something else, great play with words. First of all, I can not see, picturing you with a watermelon seed between your teeth. Before I finished reading the poem, I was expecting this spit en game with your son. The last tree lines, caught me off guard. I'm really tired tonight, long day at work and I needed a good laugh and smile.

Thank You!

Art

[robin]

Rats I want you to write this one out. It's a great gig for a beginning tale. Speaking of tail you've dipped yours in watermelon fire or something? lol Fun write and please tell us more of these lighthearted games you dream up when bored...

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Cute and funny. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[vanishing]

Sidartha, I am glad i didn't miss this writing

Watermelon sweet
drips down my cheeks
and chin
as I smile with a juicy grin
seeds between teeth
Ready - Aim - FIRE
SPIT


Bissfully scribed wonderment scene of fun,
and when the moment seems perfect
the final touch-bulls-eye
its the same way words have
the ability to make the reader
feel like a kid again
in light of love and innocence.
I loved this, thank you