His True Form in My Eyes

For James...

In my eyes,

you fly with golden wings,

amazing in all that you are...

Light blue oceans

Surround galaxies

from which our love descends...

Infinite...

As you fly above,

I sink below.

But your pure golden luminescence

coaxes me back to the surface,

where I wish to forever bask in your radiance...

In all your brilliant glory, you asked me:

"How do you love me?"

...

I love you by the moonlight reflecting off your soft skin...

I love you in secret, like conversations among the bright stars...

I love you in honesty and loyalty as strong as your heartbeats...

I wish to love you in full-fledged divinity,

but I still have much to learn...

I am still in need of a Spiritual Awakening,

so I may cherish and relish you as you so rightfully should be...

I want you to be the first and only one I see

when I finally open my eyes;

When you awaken my dormant soul.

Reviews

[AJ Thompson]

I liked this a lot. The message is clear; you certainly communicated your love for this man effectively. I feel like this could be trimmed down a bit, though. You could've used less words to communicate the same message, in your own way of course, and given the poem a better flow. When we're in love sometimes it seems like the person is absolutely perfect in every way and we tend to forget the pain they can make us feel at times.

It's almost like being hypnotized or having a spell cast on you. You definitely captured those emotions here and I like that. Will definitely check out more of your work.

[Sierra Erway]

Thank you so much! I agree that I sometimes use too many words or almost repeat lines. I will work on that!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Love is divine and omnipresent if it's true. One can surely understand this by reading your beautiful poem. The title is also wonderful :) Thanks for sharing..

[Sierra Erway]

I greatly appreciate your kind words! Thank you so much for taking time to read my poem! I am glad you enjoyed it :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Your most welcome my friend :)