Destroyer

Destroyer

A Poem by Joshua Smit

Can't you see the destruction thats within you.
Deep in your heart, a desire to destroy
destroy all purity
destroy all hope
destroy all life...
this desire lurks not in the top of your mind,
but, like a dark savage, it reveals itself only
in your darkest of nights.
it's a darkness that resides in the hearts
of all mankind, a darkness that will
take all the space you will give it.
so don't let your guard down.
Don't your GOD down,
lest you become,
what you don't want to be

© 2010 Joshua Smit


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Your thoughts are insightful, you have a nack of making the ending really powerful..the last three lines could be a poem in itself..very nice

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very Nice :)
I Like♥

Posted 14 Years Ago


its about how, if we give in to the evil desires of our hearts, they would soon come to captivate us more and more, give it an inch and it'll take a mile kinda thing

Posted 14 Years Ago


The last paragraph I don't understand?

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on November 18, 2010
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Joshua Smit
Joshua Smit

Johannesburg, gauteng, South Africa



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